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Chapter2

Sun, 27 May 2007 19:26:38 -0500

Chapter 2: The Day�s Not Blessing�s �Hello there children.� A man appeared behind them. �Going somewhere?� Now cornered. The only hope was to show them the note. Nareik with a terrified look, but trying to act brave took the note out and gave it to the man behind of him. �So you got our letter I see.� �Who a�re you?� Tough guy Toby was definitely scared! �Your worst nightmare.� He snarled. �Well aren�t you the clever ones, figuring out our message�� That doesn�t sound like a code, it is just�� Quite you!� The man screeched he had an awful voice, horrible rat like teeth and a hunchback. He wore a fine shit, and pants. He looked like a beat up old shoe in fine leather. �Come entertain the Master!� He pointed to the shadowy figure. �And if you o good you will be rewarded and get to live like me� And just like that they were gone. Not just the 9 but all the students too. �Wake up you slackers!� The rat man yelled. �You get the privilege to serve Lord Game the 1st and only! You shall all participate.� �What if we don�t want to?� One student whined. �I was hoping someone would say that.� For that instance the student was gone and reemerged the next. �How about now, you wretched toad?� �Must entertain the Master.� The kid who thought he was so tough now seemed like a mindless zombie, people could help to smirk. �You want to be next spineless skeleton�s with no brain�s? Now the man made no sense. Nareik wondered what happened down there, and how these aliens were and how they understood the language of English. �Now then everyone here is what you have to do, you shall be put into two groups, Objective: KILL THE OPPOSING GROUPS!� �WHAT?� Nareik was on his feet now, and he was not going to be some worthless killer, just to entertain some guy, it was bad enough he forged a permission slip. �I am kidding you wretched toad! You slimes can�t you take a joke? (Evil laugh, in original version they had to capture each other and it went like this: Capture the enemy group, and when the time comes we count the numbers and put up the rankings, and in the end of the year, we kill all prisoners, or people without any captives. Do not even think about escape, there isn't any escape from the Island of Game! The winner shall receive money, prizes, and are allowed to live. If you capture someone, who has prisoners from your team, then the prisoners are your new teammates. You can change teams if you like, and there are no rules. Let The Games Begin!� Nareik was not sure about the game, was it like survival? He didn�t want to capture anyone. But this is the edited version.) You ingrates! Here is how it works, you are broken up into two groups, and I don�t care who is in what groups deal with it. Then every month when the times come, each group needs to have a human sacrifice! If you don�t have 1 you die! It can be from either group, or one group can have 2 sacrifices, from the opposing groups or your friends can just turn you in! The thing is, during the month you should capture enemy group members so you are prepared at all times, because you never know when or where, the time shall come! You will be turned against your friends! The winners shall receive greatness! Let the games begin!� Nareik wasn�t sure about capturing people, or who these guys were, and the games purpose, and what were the sacrifices were for. But he had no time to ask questions, in that instance the floor was split in too, the two separate sides rose up, and the groups were set. Toby, Paul and Brian were with him, Katherine too, but Derrick who had moved to the front to here the rat man talk, was on the opposing team. �One more thing!� The rat like man yelled. �You can change sides if captured, that is if they want to use you, and not sacrifice you, muhahahhahahahhahaha!� A plan devised in his head. _________________

Chapter 1

Sun, 27 May 2007 19:25:45 -0500

Chapter 1 a new beginning The night�s journey was quiet, no one talked, no one asked about the future, everyone said thank you and went to a triangular shaped hut where they would sleep, the gangsters who thought they were tough never accepted this before. That is everyone except Nareik. He saw what happened, and the green glowing stuff had rubbed off on him, somehow. He was curious about it, he took a look at his bracelet, it was mysterious, and purple. He wondered of the visitors, who had been so generous, and the shadowy man, was he the only one who noticed his odd disposition? Well he put the green dust in his pocket, and then he felt something� Something that wasn�t there before. A presence. And then it was gone, just like that. He checked his pockets; the green substance was gone and in return was a note, �Welcome To The Island Of Game!� He would save this note; he put it in his pocket and emerged in the hut. The small hut was much bigger than it looked, and everyone was wondering what happened. Curious of what had happened and of the bus driver, and everyone was muttering their thoughts to each other. Everyone except Nareik of course, he found a bed of hay (Not a king sized bed, but it would help him in the night.) Nareik assumed it was around 7ish now but was not sure of this strange world. Was this what was beyond a whirlpool, and what was that rock? Nareik in mid thought was accompanied bye his friends Brian, and Derrick, the remorse the loss of their good friend Peter, and talked about what they would do. �You think they are holding us prisoners? Where are we?� Now Brian was stammering and he was never really afraid of anything. �No�, Toby appeared, �They are going to suck your brains out you crybaby!� �Ha hahahahhaha you are going to be thrown up by them and smashed on a rock!� Paul rudely interrupted. �You see what they did to Willie?� Brian trembling. �I t�h�i�n�k we will be fi�ne. To himself, Nareik thought of Peter, and Willie. �I wonder what is out there.� Peter had said. Was this it? And what of Nareik�s violin practice, and his family? There was no light in the dark hut now and Nereik�s friends found hay beds close to him, and the back. Nareik took the note out of his pocket. It was now crumpled. He unraveled it. And then he felt a cold breeze, swooping all the hay, and moving it like a whirlwind, swirling, he felt that presence again. And then it stopped. Like a ghost, it vanished, without a trace. Curious as ever, Nareik silently left the hut, making as much noise as a lion�s prey would before the attack. He put the note in his pocket not even giving it a glance. He had no hope for the next day. All he wished was that he lived. As he looked up at the shining sky he gazed at the moon. Red? A red moon? The sky was huge and the moon looked so far away but so close. �Like a fountain, the ornaments, and the flowing breeze.� Nareik turned around, and shortly glanced behind him, at Katherine, a girl in Nareik�s class, who was very quite, and then he looked back at the sky. �This place, is like a dream, but not a happy one, a dream of another land with a moon that is red�� In mid sentence she was cut off �I do not think it is a moon.� Nareik exclaimed. I thought it was, but look there are 5 beautiful planets, all of different shades. Nareik opened his note and read out loud. �Welcome to the Island of Game! � It was � in my pocket I guess�� Katherine surprised, touched it, and took it. She held it up to the stars glimmering like a snow glob, then the land, then and the red hovering planet. As it passed the planets view, and in the middle of the sky and the land it was in range of a glowing rock, it too began to glow. Katherine cleared her throat and said, �That just seemed like the thing to do�� Back in Nareik�s speechless hands, he knew what the rocks were. �These rocks have powers, some teleport things�� In min sentence the note�s words changed like the night changes to day, slowly but beautifully. The two read out loud together. �Come at the brink of dawn to the spot.� Where was this spot? How would they get there? �Looks like we have a mission!� The twosome turned around and saw the gang. A few moments later they all just looked up at the sky As soon as Brian, who volunteered to keep track of time, thought dawn was near, the 5 sleeping children could rest. But Brian thought it was dawn every few minutes! So they all decided to just stay awake. When it was really time, the 6 quietly arose, and moved silently threw the hut. They had chatted up a storm the night before, and were very nervous. As they approached the exit they saw the shadowy figure

Prolougue to my story!!!

Sun, 27 May 2007 19:25:08 -0500

The End Of The Path Prologue Monday. Back to school again. Nareik hated school, but he always managed to get all A�s. He had many friends but wasn�t that popular. School was boring to him he liked challenges. He got his work and his bag and his lunch and walked slowly to school. Nareik participated in many activities and was very busy no time to just hangout with his friends. He crossed the street and looked at the school. He had violin practice today, he decided not to go but he would go anyways, he enjoyed playing his instrument but not that much. He arrived at school 5 minutes early as usual to chat about the latest video game with his friends. When he met up with them he noticed, they were all carrying fancy typed reports. It was almost the end of the year, and for 1 time he forgot his home work� He didn�t remember being assigned it and he had a very good memory. He asked them about it. His friend Brian answered, �You forgot your trip slip ha now you can not go!� Nareik slumped he hated forgetting things. He quietly slipped away. The Trip The trip to National History Museum was that day and he wouldn�t miss it! He had to forge his parent�s name. He went behind a tree and took out the paper; he had thought he never received. He had to do it then. He tried. He formed the letters and perfects a perfect forgery. He thought about the severe consequences, he got very nervous now he emerged from the tree. He decided his friends would be curious about his absence so he quickly lied, o I found it I guess my mom put it in the night�O wow they all said in unisons. Well now he just slumped back on the fence until the bell rang. When he heard the sharp ring he quickly rushed inside the 3-story building. Luckily his room was on the first floor. He said good morning to the teachers, trying to act as casual as possible. Nareik took a seat all the way in the back, he new that because of his bad vision he probably couldn�t see but that was a chance he had to take. 5 minutes later everyone busted into the room carrying their slips. He took his out. Most of his friends didn�t have the same homeroom as him so he quietly sat there. The teacher Miss. Blackbird reemerged. Miss Blackbird was very sharp and saw everything (Maybe even Nareik behind the tree) �Good Morning class does everyone have their permission slips signed?� Nareik got a weird chill he always got when he teacher talked in her voice. Everyone handed the teacher the slips, when the teacher saw Nareik she gave him an odd stare. �Your slip please� He handed the crumpled up slip �You should take more pride in your work� Miss Blackbird had neither family nor friends and Nareik certainly wouldn�t become a friend of hers. The class walked out Miss Blackbird�s eyes still on Nareik. Nareik ran out quickly and met up with Brian, Derrick, and Peter his friends, along with Anthony Paul and Toby. They were all seated on the bus. Nareik sat by Peter, Brian next to Derrick, and Anthony sat in a threesome with Paul and Toby. The bus started, and they were reminded again NO TALKING but none would ever listen. Nareik and Peter just looked out the window, a trait they had in common. Nareik knowing that eventually he would get caught wished to just disappear. He was tall for his Give Out NO info Plz with black hair, freckles, and brown eyes. Peter was average height and had brown hair and blue eyes. Brian was short with black hair and brown eyes. Derrick was just as tall as Nareik now and the only difference was his weird haircuts. All of a sudden Peter talked. �I wonder what is out there.� Nareik confused whispered �Hugh?� Now in a silent whisper �I wonder�� An Escape It became silent after that, like when you are talking with a comedian and he says a bad joke it gets quiet, you never know if it is good or bad. All of a sudden the bus stopped. The buss driver got up looking possessed he announced. �This is my bus now!� No one understood what he meant. �I am the one who lurks in the forest, the one who comes out at night�I am� That was enough to tell Nareik what was happening and another boy Nareik�s Give Out NO info Plz Willey. Nareik and Willey were not good friends, but as soon as they heard it they remembered their camp days, and the stories they were told about� �Cropsies!!!� The man said. They looked at his face black from all the blood that was shed on him and all the murders he committed like the legend said. The strange Cropsies began the story � I was an early settler, I came and when I came I met an Indian tribe, they had never seen a man like me so they were afraid. But we made peace. I married the chief�s daughter and had 2 children.� When more settlers came the tribe was friendly with them. Then the settlers, who did not belong came and took our land! Killed our children, destroyed our way of life. We decided to fight back! We were engaged in much war, then the chief died of the plague the man from another land brought. His lasts words to me were.� �Cropsies, John Cropsies. Win back our land and save our people.� �I was enraged went and killed them 1 by 1 killed their children cut their hearts out hahahahhaha their blood stained me and my clothes. Then one day the men came to my house while I was away. They went to my wife. �Where is Cropsies!� �I don�t know� They took my children. She screamed and cried and thy broke their legs. They burned my house, my castle down with my wife inside, her lasts word �I don�t know.� Then they took my son threw him down the well and put rocks and sticks over it so he could never come out, he struggled, and fought so they broke his arms, and threw him in. His blood has stained my name. Then my daughter kicked and tried to get away, they broke her legs, and threw her in the lake after tying rocks too her legs. �Where is Cropsies?� She didn�t know. And all this time I watched, from the top of the mountain screaming noooooooooo!� While he was distracted, Nareik knew their fate, he heard the rest of the story he needed an escape. The True Legend Nareik looked and looked, but there was truly no escape. The crazy dude whose round face was pitch black smirked. �Ha no escape.� He picked Willey up, and broke his neck into. While everyone was screaming in terror, Nareik saw his exit the escape windows Peter saw it too! Willey lay dead on the floor. He looked up and said, �Why?� and then fell asleep for good. With all the mayhem, Nareik and Peter opened the window silently and then all of a sudden. �No, none can leave my bus!� Cropsies leaped, on the wheel and started moving again. It hadn�t even come to him that there was a huge line of cars behind them. With the car moving the boys went back in the bus. Then something that would change his life forever happened. The bus turned right heading straight for the sea. The legend had come true all who defy the evil in all of us, will be brought to the bottom of the sea. The Bottomless Pit Was he crazy? If they went in the ocean they would all die! Except the fact that the legend says Croppsies Has possessed 21 people 3 of which r gone and soon number 4. The bus hit the guard, and with everyone watching sank to the bottom of the sea. All of a sudden, under the ocean water the bus hit a rock and everything started to glow, now everyone was unconscious except Nareik he had to escape. He tried to open the doors and windows, and nothing worked, but then he realized the motor was bringing them down more, and polluting the water, people probably would only see black water, which is common because they were now in the Hudson River, even though they fell in the ocean, they drifted a long way, in a sort time. He couldn�t even turn the key now. He was loosing his breath, and then he says a whirlpool, they must have been back in the sea. But how? He looked it must have been that mysterious rock it could teleport things! Just like in the books, and movies. He needed to hit it again; maybe it could get them out of there. He tried and nothing worked, then he realized, if the bus was still on maybe for one instance it could turn and hit the rock. It was worth a try, he kept on trying and then. Success! Except then, Croppsies, now awakening grasped hid hand, he had to get it off. He managed to get him or it off for one second and then he moved the car, and bam, they were gone! Welcome to the Island of Game! Where were they? The bus was gone and so were Croppsies, and Willie, and Peter, and Miss Blackbird, all gone? But the rest of the class was gone 2? Well there was no time to think where was he? All of a sudden he wasn�t where he was again� He wasn�t dreaming so where was he/ Then he was in a black room, with everyone else, except Croppsies, Willie, Peter, and Miss. Blackbird, they must have drowned!!! Now he was sad. It looked like everyone else was awake though. He suddenly hears a voice. �Welcome to the Island of Game!� Now he was scared. Everyone looked, confused, then he saw a black figure. And people yes people he was saved. The islanders gave everyone food, and a very fashionable bracelet he just adored! The students 2 afraid to adder a word, put the bracelet�s on and ate with out a sound. Everyone was terrified from his or her experience. The shattering the silence, a stuck up kid, Shatof, who thought he knew everything, asked, �Why is it called the Island of Game?� The shadowy figured smirked � You shall find out soon enough.� _________________ I like triangles! YOU DONE SOMETHING WRONG! LOL You just got squared! I made it up cathchy right? Lol lies lies i tells u u want a link exchange? I like my square site cause it gots no squares. so go to www.youjustgotsquared.zoomshare.com cause you just got squared! I like to party with nobody cause i got no friends. I got no friends No music Do dodo No music Do dodo sike! UJUST GOT SQARED Hahaha

Siblings

Fri, 18 May 2007 20:23:29 -0500

how do u fell about your siblings?

Movies

Fri, 18 May 2007 20:23:07 -0500

What is you favorite movies?

Naruto

Fri, 18 May 2007 16:56:35 -0500

I like that naruto is bold and corageous he is an idiot though he embareses himself too much. Saska is kewler

Anime

Fri, 18 May 2007 16:55:46 -0500

Who likes anime TV? what is your favorite anime show?

Welcome!!!

Fri, 18 May 2007 16:54:56 -0500

Welcome to my new message board. I hope u like it. Plz fell free to do what ever u like. I hope u come back chat and maby tell friends. Plz rate my site and tell me what improvements it needs ty for comming.